tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post2129377175028137455..comments2023-10-13T00:11:36.098+13:00Comments on Going Places - Travel Wise: The Hare and the Tortoise - A RetellingAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00458403871284995235noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-80128196341089295802009-09-23T10:13:40.068+12:002009-09-23T10:13:40.068+12:00Hi Mikaiah.I like the way you spoke in front of th...Hi Mikaiah.I like the way you spoke in front of the camera.I think you should use more interesting words Mikaiah.Do you think that was a nice story?From othaniel.Othanielhttp://www.pesteam2.blogstop.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-20376046869232512562009-09-11T17:43:22.925+12:002009-09-11T17:43:22.925+12:00Hi Mikaiah,
That was a very good story you shared ...Hi Mikaiah,<br />That was a very good story you shared with us. You are a very good storyteller. Keep up the good work.<br /><br />From EsrahEsrahhttp://pesscribes.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-65817465795610202682009-09-11T17:37:54.361+12:002009-09-11T17:37:54.361+12:00Hi Mikaiah,
Wow that was an excellent piece of wri...Hi Mikaiah,<br />Wow that was an excellent piece of writing. You have retold the story like a true author. You used very good expression in your reading. <br /><br />From Erene.Erenehttp://peserenet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-43229377665469215892009-09-11T10:43:44.691+12:002009-09-11T10:43:44.691+12:00Hi Mikaiah,
You are a great writer. We really enj...Hi Mikaiah,<br />You are a great writer. We really enjoyed listening to your story because you used interesting words to make the story of the tortoise and the hare more exciting.<br />From Jennifer and Anisah.Room 8 Super Starshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06887382121789521324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-64303128189486241312009-09-10T08:01:49.807+12:002009-09-10T08:01:49.807+12:00Dear Mikaiah,
You must be feeling really proud of ...Dear Mikaiah,<br />You must be feeling really proud of yourself. This latest piece of writing is your best yet because you have made a real effort to use words you wouldn't usually use to explain or exress ideas. I can see in my mind what is happening in your writing just because you wrote it so well.<br />Congratulations. <br />Love from Mrs JarmanDelwyn Jarmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02975847834863200166noreply@blogger.com