tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post4288938176159931097..comments2023-10-13T00:11:36.098+13:00Comments on Going Places - Travel Wise: The GogglesAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00458403871284995235noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-12956654825850876272010-05-14T14:43:19.506+12:002010-05-14T14:43:19.506+12:00Dear Josephine,
I had some borrowed goggles once....Dear Josephine,<br /><br />I had some borrowed goggles once. They were blue and white and black. It was hard to see when I had them on in the pool.<br /><br />From MikaiahMikiahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-5068009365532925912010-05-14T14:39:19.265+12:002010-05-14T14:39:19.265+12:00I liked my story because I had a lot of important ...I liked my story because I had a lot of important details about the goggles. It made sense and was a paragraph.<br /><br />By Josephine.Josephinenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838116107662776747.post-10822344502324590692010-05-09T23:04:37.579+12:002010-05-09T23:04:37.579+12:00Dear Josephine,
Well done. You have recrafted and ...Dear Josephine,<br />Well done. You have recrafted and proof read your story really well. Goggles are very handy things to have when you go to the baths. I don't like getting itchy eyes from the water. As you said in your paragraph, goggles prevent that.<br />Love from Mrs JarmanDelwyn Jarmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02975847834863200166noreply@blogger.com