Thursday, September 10, 2009

The Hare and the Tortoise - A Retelling


Mikaiah has written his best piece yet!
What interesting words he has used to make
his retelling sound just like the book! So well
read too.
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5 comments:

  1. Delwyn JarmanSeptember 10, 2009 at 8:01 AM

    Dear Mikaiah,
    You must be feeling really proud of yourself. This latest piece of writing is your best yet because you have made a real effort to use words you wouldn't usually use to explain or exress ideas. I can see in my mind what is happening in your writing just because you wrote it so well.
    Congratulations.
    Love from Mrs Jarman

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  2. Room 8 Super StarsSeptember 11, 2009 at 10:43 AM

    Hi Mikaiah,
    You are a great writer. We really enjoyed listening to your story because you used interesting words to make the story of the tortoise and the hare more exciting.
    From Jennifer and Anisah.

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  3. EreneSeptember 11, 2009 at 5:37 PM

    Hi Mikaiah,
    Wow that was an excellent piece of writing. You have retold the story like a true author. You used very good expression in your reading.

    From Erene.

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  4. EsrahSeptember 11, 2009 at 5:43 PM

    Hi Mikaiah,
    That was a very good story you shared with us. You are a very good storyteller. Keep up the good work.

    From Esrah

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  5. OthanielSeptember 23, 2009 at 10:13 AM

    Hi Mikaiah.I like the way you spoke in front of the camera.I think you should use more interesting words Mikaiah.Do you think that was a nice story?From othaniel.

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