Thursday, September 10, 2009

Hansel and Gretel


Josephine has retold the story of Hansel and
Gretel and how they escaped from the witch.
She is getting better and better at reading
her work with expression.

4 comments:

  1. Dear Josephine,
    You really made your story very interesting by reading it so expressively. I'm glad Hansel and Gretel ran off home and lived happily ever after and didn't stay around to help the witch even when she said "Help me".
    Love from Mrs Jarman

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  2. Hi Josephine,
    I really liked listening to you tell your story because I could hear every word you said clearly and your voice changed to make the story more exciting to listen to. I like the story of Hansel and Gretel as well.
    From Xavier.

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  3. Hi Josephine
    Your story about Hansel and Gretel is good because it has interesting words
    From Saadiya.

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  4. Hi Josephine

    I like how you are reading with expression.

    From TimoTeo

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