Sunday, August 30, 2009

The Scary Wolf


Listen to Jordan read his story and find out why
Little Red Riding Hood dropped the flowers.
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  1. UnknownAugust 31, 2009 at 12:42 PM

    What a lovely story Jordan. I think it is the first time I have heard you read one of your stories and you did very well. I can see why Little Red Riding Hood dropped the flowers! Grandmothers are not supposed to be scarey. I am sure your Grandmother is kind like mine was.
    Mrs Burt

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  2. MubasshiraAugust 31, 2009 at 2:35 PM

    Hi Jordan

    I really liked your story of why Little Red Riding Hood dropped the flowers. The best part I liked in your story was how she dropped the flowers. She might of been very shocked when she saw a big bad wolf instead of her grandma. What was your favourite bit in the story Jordan? Please comment back to my blog.

    Thank You
    Mubasshira Rm 15

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  3. BlessingAugust 31, 2009 at 2:35 PM

    Wow!jordan thats a great story.if i was little red riding hood i would of dropped the flowers t because grandmas are never scary

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  4. Little Voices, Little Scholars.September 7, 2009 at 6:36 AM

    Hi Jordan,
    I love your story. I actually did not remember the part about dropping the flowers. Thank you for that. Keep writing, Jordan! I know you will be flying from now onwards.

    from,
    Mrs She.

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  5. Room 8 Super StarsSeptember 7, 2009 at 11:01 AM

    Hi Jordan,
    I really liked how you told the story of little red riding hood. I could hear everything you said because you spoke so clearly. I think you're a great writer!
    From Max.

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  6. Miss PatonSeptember 21, 2009 at 9:53 PM

    Hi Jordan,

    Thank you for sharing your writing on Little Red Riding Hood. You spoke clearly and described Little Red Riding Hood well. Keep up the great work.

    From Miss Paton Panmure Bridge School

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