The Pigs at Ambury Farm

Jordan went to Ambury Farm. He liked the pigs so he wrote about them.
After he wrote his draft he worked hard with the teacher to make his sentences even more interesting.

Draft:

At Ambury farm the pig had a hairy back and the piglets had a curly tail. The pig had a dusty back. The piglets were greedy.

Re-crafted:

At Ambury Farm I saw a sleeping pig with a hairy, pink back. It was standing up sleeping and it had a dusty back. About six piglets with curly tails were playing on the mud. They were greedy because they were trying to get the dusty pigs milk.

Nikki

For her last post of the year Nikki wrote about
herself.

I am Josephine

Josephine would like to share some information
with you about herself.

The Athletic Sports

The Zone Athletic Sports were held at Pt England
School. Listen to Cezar read his report of that
great event.

It's all about me!

Nikita has written about herself and included
lots of important details.

My Wonderful Teacher

Listen to Nikita read her story and find out what
kind of a teacher she has!

Food Glorious Food

Josephine had great ideas to write about after our
Immersion Assembly for the topic 'Food, Glorious
Food'. She and Nikita reworked the story to make
it more detailed and really interesting for the
audience.

Hansel and Gretel

Josephine has retold the story of Hansel and
Gretel and how they escaped from the witch.
She is getting better and better at reading
her work with expression.