Showing posts with label Jordan. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jordan. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 28, 2010

The Pigs at Ambury Farm

Jordan went to Ambury Farm. He liked the pigs so he wrote about them.
After he wrote his draft he worked hard with the teacher to make his sentences even more interesting.

Draft:

At Ambury farm the pig had a hairy back and the piglets had a curly tail. The pig had a dusty back. The piglets were greedy.

Re-crafted:

At Ambury Farm I saw a sleeping pig with a hairy, pink back. It was standing up sleeping and it had a dusty back. About six piglets with curly tails were playing on the mud. They were greedy because they were trying to get the dusty pigs milk.

Friday, December 4, 2009

Jelly For Your Belly!


Jordan has tried hard to write an interesting
recount of the jelly making experience he
shared with his class.

Friday, November 13, 2009

Friday, September 25, 2009

The Tooth Fairy


Have you ever wondered where your teeth go
to when they fall out? Watch our movie to
find out!

Sunday, August 30, 2009

The Scary Wolf


Listen to Jordan read his story and find out why
Little Red Riding Hood dropped the flowers.