The Goggles

In her classroom Josephine wrote a paragraph about some goggles she found at the baths. Her goal is to use words and sentences that make her work interesting and easily understood by the reader. She worked hard with the teacher to improve her writing by recrafting and proof reading it. See her draft and her recrafted writing below. Great work Josephine

Draft:
the goggles looked like real glasses . the swimming goggles is a colour of white and blue and it has a diamond. the goggles can protect your eyes the goggles can let you see in the water.
its making sure that you dont get sore eyes. the eye piece is the shape of an oval. the goggles is hanged up on the board.

Recrafted:

The goggles looked like real glasses. They were white and blue and had a diamond right in the middle. When you wore the glasses they let you see in the water and they protected your eyes. The eye piece was shaped like an oval. They hung up on the board.

I am Josephine

Josephine would like to share some information
with you about herself.

Oh What a Noise!

Oh What a Noise!

Food Glorious Food

Josephine had great ideas to write about after our
Immersion Assembly for the topic 'Food, Glorious
Food'. She and Nikita reworked the story to make
it more detailed and really interesting for the
audience.

The Tooth Fairy

Have you ever wondered where your teeth go
to when they fall out? Watch our movie to
find out!

Hansel and Gretel

Josephine has retold the story of Hansel and
Gretel and how they escaped from the witch.
She is getting better and better at reading
her work with expression.

The Thick Red Cloak

Listen to Josephine read her favourite part of
the Little Red Riding Hood story. She wrote
it herself!

The Fairy Godmother

Josephine loved learning about Cinderella.
She wishes she had a magic wand like the Fairy
Godmother.

Wonderful Dinosaur

Listen to Josephine's report on her favourite
dinosaur and learn lots of important information.

Scary Dinosaur

Listen to Josephine read her written work
about dinosaurs. She uses a lovely clear
voice and lots of expression to share her
ideas with you.

Joephine's Cousin

Josephine had a lovely outing with her kind
cousin. They had lots of fun together.

School Days Week 4 Term 1

Josephine had lots of fun playing tiggy with
her mother.