Thursday, September 10, 2009

The Hare and the Tortoise - A Retelling

Mikaiah has written his best piece yet!
What interesting words he has used to make
his retelling sound just like the book! So well
read too.


  1. Dear Mikaiah,
    You must be feeling really proud of yourself. This latest piece of writing is your best yet because you have made a real effort to use words you wouldn't usually use to explain or exress ideas. I can see in my mind what is happening in your writing just because you wrote it so well.
    Love from Mrs Jarman

  2. Hi Mikaiah,
    You are a great writer. We really enjoyed listening to your story because you used interesting words to make the story of the tortoise and the hare more exciting.
    From Jennifer and Anisah.

  3. Hi Mikaiah,
    Wow that was an excellent piece of writing. You have retold the story like a true author. You used very good expression in your reading.

    From Erene.

  4. Hi Mikaiah,
    That was a very good story you shared with us. You are a very good storyteller. Keep up the good work.

    From Esrah

  5. Hi Mikaiah.I like the way you spoke in front of the camera.I think you should use more interesting words Mikaiah.Do you think that was a nice story?From othaniel.