Wednesday, March 24, 2010

At the Picnic

While at the school picnic Nikki had lots of
fun on the beach discovering all sorts of
interesting objects.


  1. Dear Nikki,

    The picnic sounds really interesting with lots of things to do. What a shame that the crabs were dead. I'm looking forward to hearing more of your stories with details like you included in this work.
    Well done.
    Love from Mrs Jarman

  2. Dear Nikki,
    I really enjoyed listening to your recount of our school beach trip. You read with such a steady and clear voice. I liked the way you used alot of description in your story to describe what the crabs were like.

    Keep up the good work Nikki,
    Mrs Tuala