Friday, May 14, 2010

Volcanic Ash

Mikaiah has been learning how to write a good paragraph. the first sentence usually has the main ideas. The second sentence adds detail and ideas to the first sentence. The third sentence adds more details and ideas to the second sentence. Read his great paragraph about the volcanic ash.

The volcanic ash is on the cars. Can you imagine what would happen if the ash was exploding out of the volcano. If volcanic ash was pouring all over you it would be hot and dangerous.


  1. Dear Mikaiah,
    I really do like your paragraph. Each sentence is related to the main idea.
    Well done.

    Love from Mrs Jarman

  2. Hi Mikaiah,
    I liked how you wrote a paragraph about ash. That is awesome because you used lots of interesting words. Keep it up!

    From Quasia

  3. Dear Mikkaiah,

    I really like your re-crafted paragraph! Keep up the good work!

    Mrs She.