Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Apii's Weekend

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Apii had a lovely weekend with her family.
She wrote a recount about it so she could
share it with all her friends. Apii was very
proud of her writing because she used capital
letters and full stops when writing the sentences.
Her story was easy for her to read.

4 comments:

  1. Dear Apii,
    It sounds like you had great fun at the weekend with your family. I'm glad that your writing is easy to read now. You must be happy about that.
    From Mrs Jarman.

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  2. Hi Apii,
    That was a great story. When I listened to you read, I could tell where you had put your fullstops. Keep up the wonderful writing and I look forward to seeing more of your work. I'm glad you got a sticker too. Well done.

    Miss Lavakula

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  3. Hi Apii,
    I thought your story about your visit to the beach sounded like so much fun. I often go to the beach on the weekend because we have our own beautiful Pt England beach near our house. I wonder if that is where you went too? I am very happy that you got a sticker on your writing :)
    from Mrs Burt

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  4. hi apii
    i liked your story about the weekend
    from saadiya

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