Sunday, June 14, 2009

My Brother's Birthday

Nikita has been learning to think of ideas to write
about that will give the reader lots of information.
Listen to her writing about her brother's birthday
to find out what she did at his party.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Nikita,
    You certainly included lots of interesting information in your story about your brother's birthday. Lucky you having a chocolate ice-cream from the ice-cream truck. No wonder everyone had such a good time.

    Love from Mrs Jarman