Sunday, June 14, 2009

The Perfect Day

Marama had a wonderful day at Rebekah's
house. She has tried hard to make her writing
about that day interesting for you to listen to.


  1. Dear Marama,

    I'm glad that you had such a great day at Rebekah's place. You read your story very clearly and presented it with expression.

    Well done!

    Love from Mrs Jarman

  2. Dear Marama,
    Your story was very interesting to listen to. We like how we could hear every word you said and we could also tell that you enjoyed yourself from the expression in your voice.
    From Jeru and Salote in Room 10 at Grey Lynn School.

  3. Dear Marama,

    My name is Rebecca too. I hope that my friends have a perfect day when they come to visit me at my house. I'm happy that you had such a good time.
    from Rebecca.